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Review: Gauntlet of Iniquity by Daniel Adorno

Gauntlet of Iniquity (Azuleah Trilogy #2)

Gauntlet of Iniquity by Daniel Adorno

My rating: 4 of 5 stars


The Gauntlet of Iniquity is a thrilling continuation of the story of Lucius and his quest to reforge the Requiem sword. It is filled with new adventures and a few exciting twists. Along the way, we meet great new characters to root for, and get to know the old ones better.

I was especially excited to see more of Ravenmane in this book. She’s such an interesting and complex character, and I’m looking forward to more of her in the final book of the trilogy.

A solid 4 out of 5 stars.

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Review: Kingdom of Ash and Soot by C.S. Johnson

Kingdom of Ash and Soot (The Order of the Crystal Daggers, #1)Kingdom of Ash and Soot by C.S. Johnson

My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Kingdom of Ash and Soot is a cute, well-written story of intrigue and romance.

I found the characters to be well-rounded and unique. I enjoyed their interactions, and look forward to more in the next book.
The plot was fun, and moved along relatively rapidly. I did guess the ending twist by halfway through the book, but it was still quite enjoyable!
There were some heavy doses of romance throughout, which is less to my liking, but overall I found it to be a fun read! I look forward to the next books in the series!

4 out of 5 stars

I would recommend this book for ages 15+, for discussions of sex.

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Review: Create by Perry Elisabeth Kirkpatrick

CreateCreate by Perry Elisabeth Kirkpatrick
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

Create is a lovely story of two lonely creatives and the impact they can have on the world. As a writer myself, it really struck a cord with me, and reminded me how much of an impact our work can have, and how important it is to come along side other creatives. Beautifully written!

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Reviews: Trading Knives and What Is Needed, by P.H. Solomon

I recently read two prequel short stories by P.H. Solomon, and since I haven’t posted in a while, I’m sharing both those reviews tonight.

 

Trading Knives: Prequel Short Story #1 to The Bow of Hart SagaTrading Knives: Prequel Short Story #1 to The Bow of Hart Saga by P.H. Solomon
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

I greatly enjoyed Trading Knives, a short story prequel to The Bow of Destiny. There are a few typos, but not enough to detract from the story. It’s fast-paced and well-written, revealing just enough to make me want to know more. I look forward to reading the rest of this series.

 

What Is NeededWhat Is Needed by P.H. Solomon
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

I found What is Needed to be a well-written and quite interesting short story. Although there are a few typos, they do not distract too much from the flow of the plot. I was especially fascinated by the Withlings and I look forward to reading more about their Order in The Bow of Destiny. I felt connected to the three main characters – hopefully they will make an appearance in future books of the Bow of Hart Saga. Although I did not find this story quite as intriguing as Trading Knives, it was quite interesting, and I look forward to continuing with this series.

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Farewell, 2015; Welcome, 2016!

I can’t believe it’s been 2016 for over two weeks now! I guess time flies when you’re old… 😉 Anyway, I wanted to give you all a brief recap of 2015, and share some goals for 2016. I’m going to warn you, there will be many lists. That’s just how my mind works. Now let’s start with some 2015 stats:

  • I read fifty-eight books
  • I wrote over 25,000 words (I know that may not seem like a lot, especially to you 50,000-words-a-month writers, but it’s more than I’ve ever done before)
  • I reviewed fourteen books
  • I wrote forty-three blog posts
  • I gained sixty-three new followers
  • I sent out two newsletters

Alright, now that’s out of the way, on to the more fun stuff!

Of all the books I read, my favorite was probably, hmm… Ok, never mind. Let’s go with the top five.

  • Thy Kingdom Come, by Daniel Adorno
  • Holding the Future Hostage, by Tialla Rising
  • Richard III, by William Shakespeare
  • But Who Would Be Dumb Enough to Even Try It, by Enclave Publishing authors
  • The Agony and the Ecstasy, by Irving Stone

These were all great books and I highly recommend them! (Except maybe The Agony and the Ecstasy, unless you’re a mature reader and really into Michelangelo).

A few other highlights of 2015:

  • I was accepted to my top colleges. Now for the decision-making…
  • I survived a five-day backpacking trip through the mountains, which included hiking half the night down a steep trail in the pitch black, and clambering down wet, slippery rock beside a roaring gorge. Yeah, not repeating that experience.
  • I also survived nine days of intense, college-level honors classes, studying the Socratic method.
  • I participated in two NaNo Camps and the November NaNoWriMo.
  • On a less impressive note, I got Twitter. Yay; follow me! 😀

Looking ahead to 2016: 

Well, as you may have guessed, I did not finish the first draft of Something More in 2015, so that will be my top priority for early 2016. As soon as I’ve accomplished that, I will commence work on the first draft of Book Two. I’d ultimately like to have the entire trilogy drafted by the end of this year. We’ll see how that goes…

I will also be graduating from homeschool in the spring, and attending college this fall.
* cue hysterical screaming *
On a more serious note, this will be a huge change for me, so I could really use any prayers you send my way.

 

I’ll also be sending out a newsletter soon, recapping 2015 in more detail, and giving a few more exciting peeks into what I have planned for 2016 (including an awesome collage of Something More inspired pictures), so if you haven’t signed up for it yet, now would be the time. I will also be hosting a giveaway (most likely an Amazon gift card) when I reach 25 newsletter subscribers, so tell your friends too.

 

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Review: Silly Feeling & blog tour

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I have another lovely young writer friend who recently published a short story, and I had the privilege of reviewing it. Check it out!

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Silly FeelingSilly Feeling by Willowy Whisper
My rating: 4 of 5 stars


Silly Feeling

Church camp is one week. Five days. What could possibly go wrong? Nothing. She’s just being silly…
But Hannah can’t rid the feeling, and as the week unfolds, she wonders if perhaps it’s not such a silly feeling after all.
(Blurb from Goodreads)

Silly Feeling is a cute short story with just a touch of romance and suspense.
There was a whole slew of characters, and I found each of them interesting and unique. Even the minor supporting characters captured my interest.
The plot had some fun twists and side stories that kept me interested all throughout. Overall, I really enjoyed this fun little story. There were a few typos and grammatical errors, but nothing really major. A job well done, especially by such a young author. She has some real talent!

Would I recommend it? Yes
What age would I recommend it for? Any ages, really. It was quite clean!
Would I read the other books by this author? Yes

Overall Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars

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What’s Wrong With Christian Filmmaking?

Amazingly true post on Christian movies. Now I want Mr. Fleming to review Beyond the Mask

Thimblerig's Ark

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This morning I read a review of the film God’s Not Dead over at Gospelspam.com, and was struck by the thesis of the review, which is found in the title, “God’s Not Dead but Christian Screenwriting Is.”

The review had plenty of good to say about the film, but also plenty to say about the problems currently found in Christian filmmaking – specifically the writing.  This issue brings up strong feelings and thoughts in me, as I am a Christian, and I have been a student of screenwriting since 2007.  I’ve written screenplays (both produced and un-produced), and have recently published my first novel, Thimblerig’s Ark.  I felt led to respond to the article in the comment section at Gospelspam, and then decided to reproduce the bulk of my comments here.

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Review: 1001 Islands by K.T. Munson

1001 Islands1001 Islands by K.T. Munson
My rating: 3 of 5 stars


1001 Islands

The sliver of moonlight cast eerie shadows across the deck of The Dark Revenge. The Silence at the helm stood embracing the obscurity. His foreboding presence matched the anticipation aboard the ship, and no one spoke for fear they would break the stillness that encompassed them.

Tonight, everything changed.

The Dark Revenge gained on the Regatta. The raiders said nothing but he could hear the shuffle of taut female clothing and the tension in the air. It hadn’t sensed their existence, and drifted like heedless prey. Princess Roxana slept, unsuspecting of what was hunting her in the inky blackness of the night.

There was only one thing on the minds of The Silence’s crew as they drew near; Hang the Kings, Crown the People.
(Blurb from Goodreads)

I don’t think I’ve ever had such a hard time rating a book as I did with 1001 Islands.

Characters

The characters were great. They each had very distinct personalities; even the supporting characters were well-done. It was nice to see their personal struggles and the way they understood things.

Plot

The general plot line was very interesting, but there were several themes to the book that went directly against what I believe. Otherwise, I would have liked it much better. For the most part it was unpredictable and even quite exciting at times.

Overall thoughts

I really wanted to see a map. I’m sure the map would be quite beautiful, and would really help with understanding the story. The writing would have been excellent with a polishing touch. There were stunningly beautiful metaphors and descriptions, but it could have used the eye of an editor before publication. The fight scenes could have been expanded, also; I found them almost too short to be interesting. And a graphically intimate scene between two of the main characters further lowered my rating.

Would I recommend it? It really depends on your worldview
What age would I recommend it for? Adults, 18+
Would I read the other books in the series? Probably not, but I might give them a shot

Overall Rating: 2.5 out of 5 stars

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Review: Holding the Future Hostage by Tialla Rising

Holding the Future Hostage: The Legacy of the Ruby VialHolding the Future Hostage: The Legacy of the Ruby Vial by Tialla Rising
My rating: 5 of 5 stars


Holding the Future Hostage

A Mystical Bottle… A Teenage Beauty… A Criminal… A Universe of Pursuit. When a teenage girl finds an enchanting perfume Vial, her world is thrown into chaos. Friends become enemies; enemies become friends. Trust is what she needs most – and what she can’t find. Through a series of deadly experiences, she discovers that this Vial plays a vital role in deciding the fate of many. Murder and betrayal surround her – hundreds try to claim her very life. A test of determination awaits…. Will she survive? Visions of the future, attacks, kidnappings, travel, explosions, and murder fill this page-turning novel with suspense and surprise.
(Blurb from Goodreads)

I’ve been meaning to read this for a few years now, and I’m so glad I finally did! Although it’s a self-published debut novel, Holding the Future Hostage was a well-wriiten, captivating book.

Characters

I liked pretty much all of the characters. Shawn was by far my favorite (I mean, come on? What’s not to like?), and I’m so excited to read more about him in the sequel! Virginia was a fun character, her friend felt very real, and I loved her brother! I really appreciated the way they grew throughout the novel. It felt fairly realistic and not forced.

Plot

The plot was pretty exciting! There were a few slow passages, but once I neared the end, there was no putting this book down! The last several chapters were pretty much non-stop action. I was enthralled by the premise, as well. I desperately wanted to hold the Ruby Vial: it seems so powerful! There were a few plot-holes, or things that weren’t explained well, but for the most part, I enjoyed it!

Overall thoughts

Overall, I thought this was a great book. I was shocked to find that the author’s writing style is very similar to my own! I’m sure it’ll improve in her next books, though. 😉 There were a few things concerning Shawn and his connection to the Vial that I thought were not handled well, but other than that, I’d say this book is very well done, especially for a teen author! Great job, Tialla! 🙂

Would I recommend it? Yes
What age would I recommend it for? Probably ages 10+, because of a few mildly violent scenes
Would I read the other books in the series? Oh yes!

Overall Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars

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Review: A Wish Made of Glass

A Wish Made Of GlassA Wish Made Of Glass by Ashlee Willis
My rating: 5 of 5 stars


A Wish Made of Glass

Deep in a forest glade, the fey folk dance with a young human child. Their kinship is the fabric of Isidore’s childhood. But when her mother dies and her world darkens with sorrow, Isidore finds her belief in the fey folk wavering.

The love of her new step-sister, Blessing, proves an unexpected gift in her time of need. Yet even as their friendship blooms, Isidore begins to see that Blessing is everything she herself has always wanted to be, but is not. Jealousy grips Isidore as she watches this beautiful new sister steal away all she holds dear.

Driven to desperation, Isidore turns to the fey folk once more. She has only one wish to claim from them, one chance to make things right. But she must tread carefully. For wishes, like hearts, are easily broken. And obtaining the one thing she desires could mean destroying the one thing she truly needs.
(Blurb from Goodreads)

A Wish Made of Glass is a beautifully written novella that captured my heart!
The characters were very well-developed for such a short book. They each had a distinct personality, and they stayed true to that throughout the book. I loved them all!
The plot was also well done. It was a bit predictable, but I still enjoyed every moment of it! There were enough times that I was unsure how it was all going to play out, that it kept me interested and constantly wanting to know more.
Overall, I loved this book! I loved the mystical aspect of the fey, and the whole premise of the glass shoes was fascinating. I think I would have enjoyed reading it more if I hadn’t been expecting there to be more of a Cinderella feel to it. I wouldn’t even call it a Cinderella retelling. Inspired by, maybe, but not a retelling. I liked that it was original, and not just another Cinderella story. Very well done!

Would I recommend it? Yes
What age would I recommend it for? I’d say it’s appropriate for any age. Light romance, no swearing, and no violence. It’s written like a true fairytale!
Would I read the other books by this author? Yes!

Overall Rating: 5 out of 5 stars

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Review: Thy Kingdom Come by Daniel Adorno

I’ve got a review of another amazing book by Daniel Adorno. This book is fantastic!

 

Thy Kingdom Come (The Navitas Epidemic, #1)Thy Kingdom Come by Daniel Adorno

My rating: 5 of 5 stars


Thy Kingdom Come

The biotech virus, Navitas, has infected everyone, turning them into mindless electricity devourers. Dex is one of the few survivors left. He needs to escape his hometown to find his uncle, the one man who knows why Navitas exists. But can he escape before the Mindless infect him?
(Blurb from Goodreads)

Thy Kingdom Come is a suspenseful page-turner. It will keep you on the edge of your seat, right through to the end.

Characters

I really liked the characters. Dex is an interesting protagonist with some very real and difficult struggles. I really enjoyed the interactions between Dex, Lela, and Bill. They’ve got a good chemistry going on.

Plot

The plot was amazing! Seriously actionpacked, and thoroughly entertaining. Not a dull moment. A few unexpected twists kept me guessing until the end. And oh, that ending. Seriously, Daniel, are you trying to make me die of suspense? All I’m saying is, there had better be a book two! SOON!!!!

Overall thoughts

I don’t usually like first person perspective, but this one was well done. It was very engaging, and I still managed to submerge myself in it, which is not usually the case for me with first person. But seriously, I felt like I was there. When I was reading it, I would hear a thump, and my first thought was Oh my gosh, it’s a Mindless. I’m going to die, and then I would remember that it’s just a book. I’m in my house, in 2015. Everything’s going to be fine.
Now that’s good writing!

Would I recommend it? Yes! EVERYONE, READ THIS!!!!!!!!
What age would I recommend it for? Age 13+: it deals with some pretty heavy stuff
Would I read the other books in the series? Yes!!!

Overall Rating: 5 out of 5 stars

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Updates, Newsletters, and Summer Reading

Alright, let’s start with the updates:

My blog will be undergoing renovations, so be sure to keep checking back. I’ll mostly be focusing on the Writing pages. I’m also focusing on writing one of my WIPs, Something More. It is book one of a fantasy trilogy, and I’m hoping to finish the first draft by the end of the year. I got quite a bit done this month by participating in Camp NaNoWriMo, which was a great experience. You can watch my progress in the sidebar. And I know I haven’t done the Second Sunday Sales like I said I would, but I promise I will start that in August. Pinky swear.

I’ve also been able to read quite a few books this summer, which I’m pretty excited about. I’ve reviewed most of them, which you can check out on the Reviews page. I’m currently reading an incredible dystopian novel, Thy Kingdom Come, by the ridiculously talented Daniel Adorno. Yeah, I’m pretty much obsessed with his books (if you couldn’t tell by my reviews… 😉 ). Aaaand, I’m planning to read (and hopefully review) Holding the Future Hostage by Tialla Rising and The Witches’ Sleep (fabulous, by the way; it’s a re-read) by Kaitlyn Deann. I’m also reading a brilliant biography of a brilliant man: Tolkien, by Humphrey Carpenter. That basically sums up my reading life lately… And now for the exciting news!

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I am starting to send out newsletters! You can keep up to date on all my blog-happenings, the progress of my WIPs, and here’s the exciting part: I will occasionally include exclusive excerpts from my books! Subscribe right now! I’ll be sending out the first one very soon! These certainly won’t be monthly, and they probably won’t even happen very regularly, but whenever I have something exciting to update you on, I’ll send one out, and you’ll be the first to know!

 

I love you all and I hope the rest of your summer is exquisite! Thank you for reading and following my blog! ❤

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Review: Conception by Jennifer Hartz

Conception (Future Savior, #1)Conception by Jennifer Hartz
My rating: 4 of 5 stars


Conception

“I do not think it is a question of where, but when.” were the words that Charis left my mother with thirty years ago when I disappeared from Meric . . . before I was born.

Shortly after being sent back I’ve been attacked by man-eating Vaipes. I’ve learned that my father was a power wielding Guardian. I’ve discovered that the silvery-blue eyes intriguing me my entire life belong to my Watcher, Shaw who is without a doubt the most handsome man I have ever seen. And somehow I need to stop a war mongering tyrant who can manipulate people’s thoughts.

So my question isn’t where or when. It is how? How can I help the people of Meric when I can’t stop myself from falling in love?
(Blurb from Goodreads)

Conception was an interesting read set in a beautiful fantasy world.

Characters

I thought the characters were pretty good. They were well developed and were all pretty lovable. There was one character that I didn’t care for, but the rest were portrayed well.

Plot

The plot was very exciting. There was a lot of foreshadowing, which really makes me want to read the next one. The action was relatively fast-paced, and I enjoyed the battle scenes.

Overall thoughts

I really enjoyed this book. It has an exciting storyline, and the descriptions were lovely. I was appalled, however, by the apparent lack of any editing whatsoever. There were so many typos and misuses of words that it really distracted from what would have otherwise been a good book. I would like to advise anyone who is writing a book, please edit!

Would I recommend it? Yes, if you can get over the grammatical errors
Would I let my kids read it? Yes
Would I read the other books in the series? Yes, if only to find out what happens!

Overall Rating: 3.5 out of 5 stars

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Review: Unknown Sender by Ryan Lanz

Unknown SenderUnknown Sender by Ryan Lanz

My rating: 4 of 5 stars


Unknown Sender

Jessica’s world revolves around studying at college and affording prepackaged meals, which leaves little time for socializing. In fact, she is quite content without being noticed, which only makes the attention of a mystery texter all the more unwanted.

She isn’t unfamiliar with strange advances, but this is something entirely different. This person knows things about her. Things beyond just an average stalker.

Even after all that, Jessica would be much more content to forget than discover who is chasing her, electronically or otherwise. Eventually, she finds out that she can’t outrun her past.
(Blurb from Goodreads)

 

This was my first time reading horror. I think I may have stumbled upon an awesome genre!

Characters

Because it is a short story, the characters were not very well developed. I didn’t notice anything jarring in their personalities.

Plot

The plot was good, albeit I think it should have been drawn out a little more. There wasn’t much time for suspense. I liked the twist at the end, though.

Overall thoughts

I really liked it. It drew me in, and made me want to know who the mysterious texter was. I would have liked it better if had been a little longer, so there was more suspense. But it was fine.

Would I recommend it? Yes, to 15+ for slightly suggestive content, and because it’s horror
Would I let my kids read it? Yes, when they’re 15+
Would I read the other books by this author? Yes

Overall Rating: 4 out of 5 stars

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Reviews: The Lightning Thief by Rick Riordan, and Unleashed by Jennifer Hartz

Two reviews! Hooray for summer reading time!! 😀

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The Lightning Thief (Percy Jackson and the Olympians, #1)The Lightning Thief by Rick Riordan

My rating: 5 of 5 stars


The Lightning Thief

Percy Jackson is a good kid, but he can’t seem to focus on his schoolwork or control his temper. And lately, being away at boarding school is only getting worse-Percy could have sworn his pre-algebra teacher turned into a monster and tried to kill him. When Percy’s mom finds out, she knows it’s time that he knew the truth about where he came from, and that he go to the one place he’ll be safe. She sends Percy to Camp Half Blood, a summer camp for demigods (on Long Island), where he learns that the father he never knew is Poseidon, God of the Sea. Soon a mystery unfolds and together with his friends — one a satyr and the other the demigod daughter of Athena — Percy sets out on a quest across the United States to reach the gates of the Underworld (located in a recording studio in Hollywood) and prevent a catastrophic war between the gods.

Greek mythology? YES PLEASE!!!

Characters

They were awesome! Percy is so sarcastic, I love it! And I really liked how the children of each of the gods had unique personalities specific to that god.

Plot

The plot flowed nicely. It was fast-paced, with never a dull moment. I kept waiting for some plot points to be resolved, though, and they never were, which was frustrating. But it is a series, so I guess I’ll have to read the rest of them!

Overall thoughts

I absolutely adore Greek mythology, so this was fabulous! There was quite a bit of explaining of things, that I thought was unnecessary, but it is written for younger kids (who aren’t necessarily mythology addicts), so that’s understandable. I can’t wait to read the rest of this series!

Would I recommend it? Oh, yes!
Would I let my kids read it? Yes
Would I read the other books in the series? Yes!

Overall Rating: 5 out of 5 stars

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Unleashed (Heroes of the Horde #1)Unleashed by Jennifer Hartz

My rating: 3 of 5 stars


Unleashed

Six mismatched students at Deacon Proprietary are about to discover the demonic legend of their school’s origin is actually true. Not only have they obtained amazing powers, but they’ve also unleashed the demonic Horde. Now it’s up to these six high school freshmen to stop the Horde before its evil spreads throughout the school and beyond.
(Blurb from Goodreads)

Unleashed was an interesting book about kids who acquired super powers with which to fight demons.

Characters

The characters were pretty good. I liked that they were all unique, and not exactly the same. Unfortunately, they were not very round characters.

Plot

The plot did not flow well. Each chapter was from a different character’s perspective (in first person, which I found jarring), and even within the chapter the plot jumped.

Overall thoughts

The dating. Ugh. I mean really, in ninth grade? Also, it was riddled with typos. Other than that, it was ok.

Would I recommend it? No
Would I let my kids read it? I would let them, if they wanted to, once they were in high school
Would I read the other books in the series? Maybe

Overall Rating: 3 out of 5 stars

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Review: The Betrayal by Douglas Bond

The Betrayal: A Novel on John CalvinThe Betrayal: A Novel on John Calvin by Douglas Bond

My rating: 5 of 5 stars

The Betrayal by Douglas Bond is a very well written novel on the life of John Calvin. The way Bond portrays him through the eyes of his personal servant (and sworn enemy) gives a unique picture of his life.

Characters

The characters were well done. Jean-Louis, the protagonist, is a very interesting character. His emotions are shown very vividly; his intense feelings toward Calvin drive his every action. The growth of the characters throughout the story was also well executed.

Plot

Likewise, the plot flowed well, each event being smoothly linked to the next. As the narrator, Jean-Louis’ comments would easily join two otherwise unconnected events to each other.

Overall thoughts

I greatly enjoyed this book. It was a captivating read, and kept my interest to its completion. I grew attached to the main characters, and was devastated at the end.

Would I recommend it? Yes indeed, especially to historical fiction lovers.
Would I let my kids read it? It is definitely an adult novel, because of the depth of writing, but I will definitely let my kids read it, especially if they are advanced readers.

Overall Rating: 5 out of 5 stars

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Review: Carpe Tempus by Daniel Adorno

I just read this awesome short story by one of my new favorite authors. It’s free on Kindle and several other ebook distributors, so grab it, and read it!!

 

Carpe TempusCarpe Tempus by Daniel Adorno
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

Carpe Tempus is a great short story about using time wisely. Even in so few pages, Adorno does a masterful job of realistically portraying the characters. You get to know them and you feel for them. I highly recommend this book!


5 out of 5 stars

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Review: Princess of the Light by N.N. Light

Princess of the LightPrincess of the Light by N.N. Light

My rating: 3 of 5 stars


The Princess of the Light

Gabriel, the Archangel and Messenger of God – yeah that Gabriel, visited Mary Miller. He told her, as the key she is destined to spread the Light and vanquish the Darkness. Her first assignment is to restore the soul of the Walking Man. Sounds simple enough until she’s thrown in the face of evil, and then Joe Deacons enters her heart. This battle just got a lot more complicated. She must complete her mission without losing all she loves.

Princess of the Light had some good potential. Although the execution of the story was less than well done, it still had some interesting components.

Characters

The main characters irritated me. Mary and Joe were “soul mates”, which apparently means that they can be as passionate as they want. Ok, but what about getting married? If you’re soul mates, why aren’t you even discussing marriage? They seemed flat, too. Not a whole lot of development there. The supporting characters were more interesting to me, probably because we saw less of them. I especially liked Than. I never thought I could like a demon….

Plot

At the beginning, and in various places through the book, the plot jumped, causing slight confusion. The characters had just met, and then they were suddenly madly in love, and had been dating for a while. The POV switched back and forth frequently as well, and, although it was clearly labeled, I still found it confusing. The premise to the story was quite interesting, but unfortunately, it did not deliver. The action lagged, and there were scenes that seemed completely pointless and unrelated. And while interesting, the demon fighting was mostly told, not shown. The demon-banishing incantation seemed a bit off, as well. I mean, we’re using fairytale spells to destroy demons? That doesn’t seem right to me…

Overall thoughts

I thought the idea behind the story was great, and had a lot of potential. Some massive editing would have greatly improved this book. The characters needed work, and the action could have been cleaned up a bit, in addition to the more minor tense and grammatical issues.

Would I recommend it? No
Would I let my kids read it? Probably not.

Overall Rating: 3 out of 5 stars

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